Saturday, May 13

haiku 2006 nine

she crawls on all fours
I masturbate behind her
soon, wet snow will fall


Anonymous poppy said...

Now i'm going to protest for the 'wet snow'. Though it keeps a surrealistic contrast, a 'hot rain' would force the hidden vibes of the poem.

Interestingly enough, just the two of us seem to appreciate masturbation..especially in what concerns poetry.

10:52 PM

Blogger DJ Kirkby said...

surpisingly erotic

3:44 PM


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